This is a
poem I cannot take full credit for. My classmates and I collaborated to create
this poem. We were imitating the style of a poem called “Thirteen Ways of
Looking at a Blackbird” as we passed this paper around the class to create a
poem. I don’t really enjoy this style of writing and found the original poem
quite odd. I didn’t understand the point.
Thirteen Ways
of Looking at a Cloud
With the birds
in the sky
Between the
earth and the sun
Rest the
clouds
Webs of
dreams appear
Illuminating the
desires of many
They sat
there in the sky waiting to
Dissolve if
and when they came true
They were as
light as the clouds
The cloud
clears its throat
And clearly
dictates his monologue of nature
The rain
crashes down
And the wind
applauds the wonderful performance
First, I see
a sailboat
But then I see
a fish
I love how
they change so beautifully
Clouds shifting
is pure bliss
Laying my
head in the soft grass
I watched as
clouds pass me by
Before long
the sun is gone
And my day is
done
Clouds have
covered the light
With looming
shapes
The sun is
gone
And the world
is dark
The clouds
Miraculously
open up
Shrouding him
in a
Burst of
sunshine
Lending a
momentary
Halo of light
The peaceful melodies
woven against the sky
Thin wisps
rise and fall as the
Wind weaves a
soft tune through the clouds
The cloud
only slightly
Mimicked your
face
Which made me
shed a
Single tear
Which then
another cloud mimicked
At the sight
of Zeus
Flying across
the clouds
Even the smallest
object
Would bow to
its feet
As Jack
climbed the bean
It grew and
it grew
Until the
very tip passed through the clouds
With the
clouds covering the sun
The ground
hog came out
Not a shadow
in sight
I looked up
in the sky
Wondering when
the cloud shaped like a bee
Would make
its way around the world
And finally
back to me.
I actually really liked the way this turned out. The visuals are really pretty.
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