I
wrote this piece as one of my two time poems. I stretched it out to be longer
when I first wrote it, but felt it was naturally a shorter poem. When I later
edited this poem I cut out the extra lines to what is left now. I had fun
writing with the short rhymed couplets. I felt this poem was very clean and structured
which I liked that about it.
Split
I
do not know the right way to go,
But
the road splits hence it must be so,
I
have followed my feet to this spot,
But
it is right here which I have been caught,
I
felt a comfort under this sky,
But
it was just infinitely high,
I
saw the wind rushing through the grass,
But
my heart knew the moment would pass,
I
must keep on following my feet,
But
one day the time will come to meet.
Really cool idea! Choosing a path is hard, I know the feeling.
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